Interstellar Megachef was another 450-page book that I thought held a 250-page story. Often when I have that feeling about a book, I consider what I think should be cut but I usually draw a blank and offer the slightly lame explanation that if I knew where and how to trim novels, I would be a book editor. In this case, though, I have a very specific idea: start the novel about a third of the way down page 193.

It’s not that what has gone before is unnecessary, exactly, it’s just that the awkward meeting between Serenity Ko and Saras Kaveri in a gloomy side-street archway, with Saras on the verge of a breakdown, is where the story really starts. I don’t know if Lakshminarayan’s publisher would have accepted a book that was forty percent shorter; I don’t know if Lakshminarayan’s intended audience enjoyed the backstory more than I did; I don’t know if either author or prospective audience just liked the characters well enough to enjoy simply spending time with them. I do think that attentive readers could have picked up all of the relevant bits of what had gone before, and that figuring it out, rather than having it served up on a platter, would have been part of the fun. I don’t even think that Lakshminarayan would have needed to add much, if any, exposition to add in the details that led up to the fateful meeting.
At any rate, Serenity Ko is brilliant, as Lakshminarayan tells readers numerous times. She’s a sim designer for one of the best organizations on Primus; she’s hard-charging, capable, full of insight and destined for great things. She’s also young, emotionally fragile, very full of herself, and prone to misjudging how her actions will affect people. She’s from a family of exceptional achievers and feels the need to prove herself as one of them, which she does by throwing herself into her work — in an environment that resembles a 2020s video game company — and ignoring her family almost entirely. Her family mostly forgives her, because families often do, and because it serves the plot of the novel. The family is highly placed in Primian society, which is theoretically egalitarian but very much is not in practice.
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